Monday, July 6, 2009
(Here is only a part of the poem)
As the thought comes across
my pensive mind; intuition fails me
Sliding down to blindness; a sense of loss;
Deary isolation kills me.
Grabbed by a real challenge.
Is recollection of the past
a real help? When winds of change
wanting in life so to blow away the dust?
Life hard upon me this moment
Thoughts are measureless, but
reality is not, I understand:
From the world I not shut.
I see a new day coming.
Then why do I crave still
for the bygone? Trying
to cover the only journey impossible
(retreat to yesterday?)
Vainly trying to clasp water
in my fist; cherished fond memories:
Aim at holding on to them forever?
And hover around reality and dreams?
Reconciliation possible no more
Though my feelings are extant even today.
to be contd..
Copyright © 2009 Bhaswati
(image used in the post was sent by a very good friend.)
Though my feelings are extant even today".
This one much improved n really nice written bt u must use words like, is,are,was,can, have.
it's nt only the flow or u trying to write like old poets whose wordings r so deep dat they wont require these.
I appreciate u for dis bt being poetical n correct in english is more imp.
wow ... that was GREAT!!!
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Keep writing!!!
Good Going Mate......
in my fist"
This comparison to cherished memories was awesome... gr8 work... keep writing...
@Subhayan thank u...! the template is sweet isn't it?