Friday, July 10, 2009
(Here is the second part of the poem. I request the readers to again read the first part before reading this second portion. It will help you understand the poem better.)
I decided never to look back. I forswore.
Sure no one can ever sway
me. We will sunder, I never thought
But circumstances deterred me.
I cannot trenchantly say what
I want times to be
And what my retentive mind sighs for.
Unknowingly exacerbating my pains.
All these voices: I abhor
them. They make vain
all my attempts to assuage.
I know their care as genuine, still
I want to be alone as my pains I gauge
And for future make my mind tranquil.
They force me realize my mistake
That I am the one deserving blame.
They say I’m craven and I fake
My feelings insomuch that I am
trying to run from verity, and
That I am fooling myself so.
Pretending to be satisfied, and to defend
my decision. I force myself to show
I’m happy (They’re so true, yes)
to be contd..
Copyright © 2009 Bhaswati
I can just get a hint of its beauty, would be quite helpful if you explained it a bit. Thanx a lot!
wait for the 3rd part..
n i loved it....
hw u write poems yaar??
seriously..do u get some sensation or something strange that u pen down?
i try at times but all efforts in vain..
really cool yaar..keep up your poems.!
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-Amaresh
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